|
Trixie
Belden, amateur detective, is on a mission to save her club, the Bob-Whites
of the Glen, from being forced to disband by the school board because of
vandalism. The beginning was confusing, because I didn't know anything about
their club. I began to follow the story, but I couldn't really relate. As we
follow Trixie and the other Bob-Whites through the process of organizing an
antique show to prove their club's worthiness, I noticed that the author,
Kathryn Kenny, in what looked like an attempt to clarify information, made
the dialogue excessively unrealistic. The characters spoke in a way that
most obviously was a way of conscious explanation to an audience, the
reader. Prior
to receiving this book, I had read a flattering recommendation of the series
in a magazine, I was excited when I noticed it had been distributed to me to
review, but the excitement quickly dissolved as I read into the world of
Sleepyside village. It seemed as though the author had no idea what it was
like to be a teen in the early sixties or any time period at all, for that
matter. The
Trixie Belden book reminded me of both Nancy Drew and the Boxcar Children.
Both other books are sort of cheesy and involve detectives being nearly
dependent on convenient coincidences. Before any minor problem can arise in
Trixie Belden's plans, someone in some way related to Trixie or her two
conveniently rich best friends has taken care of it. I
was also a bit disappointed in the book because there were no plot twists.
As soon as a suspicious character entered the story, I, as the reader, knew
instantly whether or not they had been involved in the crimes the story
centered around. Unlike most good detective stories, these early hunches
were nearly always right on target. I was hoping constantly to see a
character with downplayed motive to emerge as the perpetrator. This is
something any talented author can make happen for their readers who have
grown to expect it. I might, however, still recommend this book to a bright
third or fourth grader who doesn't yet depend on plot twists, but can stand
a rather tedious book. ~
Emma Shebat, 7th grade, |